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March 31 2012 6 31 /03 /March /2012 21:36

echoes
 echoes
hear the screams
echoes
 echoes
comes back in dreams
knuckles go white
 with iron grip
as does his face
he begins to slip
no no
 echoes in dreams
no
no
crescendo screams
i didnt let go
i wont let go
no
no
no

held tight
held fast
torn from me
just the same
torn from me
I screamed his name
his name
owww n howwwwl
i ll never let go
owww howwwwl
no
NO
torn
from the inside
slipped past
and passed
and past
and beyond
where i couldnt go

couldnt go
with him
with him
i couldnt go
looking into
empty eyes
flat and dull
grey like the sky
looking down
still held tight
wanting
needing
something to fight
in my arms
i still held
now and always
empty shell
passed
and past
still held fast
i could not see
but still i felt him
felt him
torn from me
ripped  and torn
away and gone
while still i held
him in my arms
torn from me
and torn in two
torn from me
my heart stopped too
rocking
rocking
no more screams
silent now
except for dreams
echoes
echoes
fading screams
silent now
except in dreams
silent silent
except in dreams
torn from me torn apart
his heart stopped beating
and mine wont start

 

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  • : A mix of poetry, doggeral (intentionally mispelled (sic) as it IS doggerel), stories, familial stuff, and disjointed thoughts, posted to hopefully elicit dailogue(s), arguments, and/or a reader's ideas, poetry, etc. It is not polished, not especially literate, certainly not universal--sorry, it is just me.
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  • A pre-pubescent brain in an aging shell. One of a million monkeys, pounding a million keyboards, for a million years, hoping to write one good poem. A dreamer.
  • A pre-pubescent brain in an aging shell. One of a million monkeys, pounding a million keyboards, for a million years, hoping to write one good poem. A dreamer.

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For specific interests, please click on specific interest(s) found in category box below "Links"  on right side, below.

Poetry and Doggeral: Ken's poetry

Stories and Fables: Ken's Prose

Thot-Jots: Ken's ramblings on various things

Family: Ken's biographical and autobiographical items--probably of little interest to non-family, maybe not even them.

Other categories: self-evident--I hope

 

You may notice some refreshingly different poetry on the blog. It is from a friend of mine who goes by Eyeshy

My ex-son-in-law, David, has been published here, now, as well.

Another newby: happybluetoes. She writes glimpses, short stories, and poetry. Welcome her with a comment.

Neominini has his first contribution on the blog. If you like his songs please do two things: enter a comment at the end of the article, and go to links down on right side of Home Page and go to his web-site, where you can listen to his music. Enjoy. 

Elisha Kayne--a published author has kindly contributed to the blog. Check her out.

 

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My personal favorites:

The Girl With the Cheshire Grin--absolutely my current "kc" favorite poem(?)

In My Soul (poetry-doggeral)

Camelot (poetry-doggeral)

Rain (a friend's poetry)

Cathedral (thot jots)

Mystic Window 1&2 (poetry-doggeral)

Do ye ken

The Kiss

Why do I tremble

Miranda--a work in-process